tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post7657911387931016493..comments2023-09-23T07:23:46.408-06:00Comments on cucullus non facit monachum: Wednesday Writings #12 - At the TowerOkiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-81705307902292169462010-06-04T16:07:22.241-06:002010-06-04T16:07:22.241-06:00Thanks Logan. Yeah, I did change from Gabbie to G...Thanks Logan. Yeah, I did change from Gabbie to Gabby. I started with Gabbie and then kept misspelling it myself so I decided it was somewhat precocious and just swapped to the more common spelling. I really should go back and change it in the first couple of segments.Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-22875787853099806132010-06-04T14:48:14.781-06:002010-06-04T14:48:14.781-06:00Ooh, I just read through every part to be caught u...Ooh, I just read through every part to be caught up. They've been sitting in my TBR list for a bit, and I gotta say, I love it. Excellent use of tension, suspense, mystery, and occasional humor. Great stuff. I can't wait to see where it goes. I've got my theories...<br /><br />By the way, I noticed that your first two parts spelled Gabby as Gabbie. Not sure if you consciously switched these or not.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-7465813376184784962010-06-03T21:13:14.477-06:002010-06-03T21:13:14.477-06:00Thanks for the heads up...I appreciate that. It s...Thanks for the heads up...I appreciate that. It seems I was having too much fun trying to add the tension/action to the moment and lost the general voice.Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-42482753762087781682010-06-02T18:44:08.372-06:002010-06-02T18:44:08.372-06:00i am enjoying it...there was a change in your voic...i am enjoying it...there was a change in your voice it seemed when the men grabbed the girls...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com