tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post4346390985940798815..comments2023-09-23T07:23:46.408-06:00Comments on cucullus non facit monachum: Wednesday Writings # 34 - Applying PressureOkiehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-73031501323818009172010-11-04T15:15:22.633-06:002010-11-04T15:15:22.633-06:00I hate Dalton so much.
So, obviously, you're ...I hate Dalton so much.<br /><br />So, obviously, you're doing a great job. :) <br /><br />(Seriously, I can't wait for someone to put a bullet into his head.)Phoenixhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07477498671080132176noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-21745646060650094052010-11-04T07:06:56.966-06:002010-11-04T07:06:56.966-06:00I love this idea of creative writing wednesdays! I...I love this idea of creative writing wednesdays! I think it's good to give yourself the discipline, and I need to come up with something like that. I always get my writing done, but sometimes it stresses me out with everything else I have to do and maybe if I just set time aside consistently it would alleviate that stress.<br /><br />That being said, I really like you're writing. Dalton is an interesting character. I wonder when this will all be a book....Climb2Nowherehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01401286435338987951noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-37301193006505332872010-11-04T06:32:45.217-06:002010-11-04T06:32:45.217-06:00Excellent addition. Very nice, indeed. And while...Excellent addition. Very nice, indeed. And while I think many of Dalton's actions are a bit over-the-top (okay, a lot over-the-top, but still...), they fit his character perfectly. He's just cocky enough to act how he does.logankstewarthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12269634215857320344noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-55100516033408019752010-11-03T18:51:54.818-06:002010-11-03T18:51:54.818-06:00Generally my dialog segments have been more comple...Generally my dialog segments have been more complete/finished. I broke them apart more this time based on seeing it done in a piece I was reading for someone else...trying to add action and emotion amid the speaking itself.Okiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01393689307300304035noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8401276.post-6680945073040556632010-11-03T18:14:55.981-06:002010-11-03T18:14:55.981-06:00nice chapter...have you always left those lines ha...nice chapter...have you always left those lines hanging when you do dialogue? dont remember that ..structurally i would tie that up...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com